Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Rate this poem one to ten and then discuss?

flowers and chocolate catfish in licorice streams of copius joy.


mobiles of dancing pixies and carousel horses on stixies flower power like the sixties and happy rainbow waves of honesty.


rose pedal gumdrops and cyclones of majestic unicorns in hug filled fields of enchantment.waterfalls of shiny violet peace signs splashing into cool pools of red lipped mermaids.jesus shaped sugar cookies coated with un-conditional pleasure and un-forgettable funtasm.it is a wonderland of fluttering amusement butterflies with candy canes and streamers.beautiful fire works that makes sounds of babies laughing and giggling oh so cutely.fleece teddy bear touches and soft pillowy clouds of pure cotton delight for all.rolling down hills of laffy taffy with carts of vacant bliss and big dough eyes that twinkle.extravagent red balloon adventure ride fantasy puppet show.blooming orchids in caramel rain storm down pours where you can use my imagination as an umbrella.


we skip and sing...RAPIST!

Rate this poem one to ten and then discuss?
It sounds like a chemical romance to me....
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A dung beetle wouldn't touch that crap.
Reply:1, that poem stinks
Reply:*gasp* Another brilliant poem my love. Really great imagery.


10/10


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