Do you like my poem? Answer with critique, but not to cruel please. :)?

*Diversity*





I am white


You are black


Everyone’s different


So why do we have to fight?





No one is bizarre


Maybe just diverse


It isn’t like,


They’re some person that is cursed





Why can’t everyone bestow,


The varied people in our world?


And maybe then our tolerance


Will grow and grow and grow





To be like on big flower


In the middle of a field,


That one little flower has the power,


To change the whole wide world





If everyone could understand


That no one is a freak


Then maybe just maybe


It’s happiness our world can seek

Do you like my poem? Answer with critique, but not to cruel please. :)?
~ John F. Kennedy once said that if more politicians knew poetry, and more poets knew politics, well,..well then the world would be a much better place ~





And your poem seems to prove his point. The message is nice ~ well, actually strong ~ , and the metaphpor in regards to the flower paints a beautiful picture for the reader. Keep up with the writing, k?

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