LADIES,, A poem to ponder,,, :) simple ,,,, Motion,,,,,,?

"Motion"





There's something special in your motion,


your eyes that sparkle with unending devotion.


Your shine, your light, such enviable attraction,


your smile undimmed, stirs a tingled reaction.





Though I may not know you, I feel your spirit,


true wisdom, your charm, your beauty I'm near it.


an afterglow bright, you leave indelible marks,


in my thoughts, my soul, for I wish to embark.





Upon a journey of your thoughts, your insatiable thirst.


To open my mind, I receive your knowledge first.


Your body a temple, a beautiful morning dew flower,


blessed to perfection, with sensuality and power.


There's something speical.... your Motion....

LADIES,, A poem to ponder,,, :) simple ,,,, Motion,,,,,,?
hello my friend,


i see you are still writing,that pleases me. your work is like an art of beauty so keep it up.





love,stormy
Reply:I love this........
Reply:Thank you.
Reply:cool
Reply:i think its beautiful and fresh


makes a girl feel like shes worth something, (unlike


those hideous mtv music videos)


i adore your poetry
Reply:Am I the only one that sees the underlying sexual power she has over him?





I liked it
Reply:absolutly perfect
Reply:i mean yea it is romantic, but as far as poetry goes it isnt very good.





you see good poetry always leaves something up for personal interpretation, and yours lacks this. your message is too clear